| lisa_ab ( |
Loved it!!
As much as I enjoy a little smutty interlude, I really love the romance and the youthful feel to stories like your missing moment here.
You really captured that feeling of teenage romance here. I swear it took me back to my first boyfriend and the first night we made out (snogged American style, LOL) and didn't go very far....but it was still amazing and new and just joyful.
Great story. Just great.
As much as I enjoy a little smutty interlude, I really love the romance and the youthful feel to stories like your missing moment here.
You really captured that feeling of teenage romance here. I swear it took me back to my first boyfriend and the first night we made out (snogged American style, LOL) and didn't go very far....but it was still amazing and new and just joyful.
Great story. Just great.